The future is bright [CHAPTER I – THE ROOM] I stepped wher…

Minenclown ·

The future is bright

[CHAPTER I – THE ROOM]
I stepped where voices echo gold
Where velvet cloaks the coldest hold
No anger drawn, no banners raised
Just eyes that watched and hands that praised

I did not knock. I did not kneel.
I let the marble feel my heel.
And all I brought was open sight—
No sword, no flame. Just quiet light.

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[CHAPTER II – THE CROWN]
I saw the weight they call a crown
Not worn, but braced to not fall down
It spoke in silence, shaped like law
But all I heard was breathless awe

I did not curse. I did not bow.
I only asked the room: “What now?”
No rage, no noise, just what remains
When gold forgets it once knew veins

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[CHAPTER III – THE BREAK]
It didn’t crack. It didn’t scream.
It simply shifted in the gleam
A crown unmade not by a fight
But by the absence of its right

And I? I merely stood and saw
The space between belief and law
Not enemy, not friend, not thief—
Just voice, and form, and held belief

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[CODA – whispered with rising strings]
Crownbreaker.
Not the storm, but the stillness it leaves.
Not the end, but the breath it retrieves.

Replies

metamitya ·

I enjoyed this. keep going

Minenclown ·

I will. Currently i slowed down on releasing new content because i am evolving irl, taken more action on things i did not before.

You could say that i am evolving with every song. 😃

ruthheasman ·

Very theatrical and epic! It reminds me of this one I made with CSW's verse. It's possibly my favourite of the forthcoming album I'm about to publish. It gets better with each listen.

The Palace of Sand
Lyrics by Dr C S Wright https://suno.com/song/91bd98c8-2c65-44dd-94c1-1b8a0b6f0090

Minenclown ·

I like theatrical "art". It fits the current world situation perfectly by telling people on a beautiful way what needs to be thought about.

Mostly its without direction, somethimes its a direction being questioned and very rare its a direction being lifted into holy levels.

Now i get what theatre and this kind of music really means and why its important. At least it got important for me.