I am early stage reaching out. I sent a voicenote to an Iri…

I am early stage reaching out. I sent a voicenote to an Irish lady per her request; she’s in my demographic (her insta just blew up so she’s popular). She said she had a hard time understanding what it was. So clearly, I need to simplify my message. 🤣. Will work on it, meanwhile I’m doing many other very cool BSV-related things so I’m taking that one slow. Have you any suggestions for a simple message for my demographic for Velo?